Comments : There's No Tomorrow

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello J and a belated welcome to the site.

    This is an important story, well told and well rhymed. The message is excellent: Don't keep delaying - there may not be a tomorrow.

    Keep writing and all the best
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by J Young

      Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback!

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Piece full of emotions. great write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such a good story written here with a great meaning behind it.

    Live for today as you never know when there will be another day.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by J Young

      Thanks! I hope my message inspires you. Don't mean it to be a downer, just wanted to say "cherish every day you have with someone."

      :)

  • 8 years ago

    by flawed diamond

    So beautiful