Hello Brenda,

I was scrolling through your recent works and came across this poem. It states it's a 'fridge magnetic poem '. I had not heard of this form until the one you posted recently. I guess you have a set selection of words to choose from and from these you arrange a poem. Cool!

The poem speaks of a heart and it's delicate connection with love. Heartbreak is linked to loosing the 'love ' of a person. I like how you phrase the positive vs negative options.
1. 'Being whispered to' really paints a picture of intimacy .
2. 'Burst into pieces ' again graphic imagery that portray a broken heart.

Brenda, I know the form is restrictive and so the words available were limited, but I would have been tempted to rhyme 'night ' with the last few lines 'into shards of light '

Just an idea.

Well done and take care,

Michael