Refrigerator magnet poetry 2

by Brenda   Apr 4, 2016


They say fools fall in love
in the hot moist night
with a full moon burning
it takes your soul
it seduces you with pleasure
it makes me crazy

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda,

    Very clever and seductive you may say.

    The imagery is wonderful.
    Well done.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks Em! I really appreciate your kind words. Take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love this piece. I can imagine two steamy heads catching some cool air by opening the refrigerator. Well done. Take care

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Dagmar, Thank-you! I absolutely love your analogy of this, awesome idea of sticking your head in the fridge to cool off, maybe get a drink? Take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I love this, the atmosphere, the imagery, the passion and heat - funny as it contrasts the coolness of the fridge. lol

    Nominated.

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, Wow-thank you so much! I had fun doing this, magnet poetry keeps you lean on the wording. Take care-Brenda

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