Lovely little piece.

I especially like the last lines as moon gives way to the sun for a new day and we should all be happy for that.

Em

Andrea

This is beautiful. You have such a delicate way with words.

"Every sigh the moon makes is another moment I have fallen"

^^^

I love alliteration with the 'm' sound - so soothing and subtle.

All the best,
Ben

Andrea, beautiful as always! I too love the line of the moon sighing over your stumbles-the moon illuminates your darkness and helps you see another day. Well done! Brenda

Your poems especially on nature is stunning and written with such elegance. The moon never really stands alone there is always a few stars not far. The moon shines through the night and the the sun is coming on providing light and warmth. Amazing how nature works.
Absolutely beautiful. Take care