You and Me

by Once an Angel   Apr 5, 2016


In that silence
the words frozen on our lips,
frozen,
lingering on.
"What then will become of us?"
The us that once contrived
you and I -
Us.
Is there still, us?
If we separate
what breaks off
what is left
is still you and I?
No, not I.
I is altered,
changed and shattered,
new and foreign
forlorn I.
Can you stay the same?
Maybe so.
Maybe not.
Ask yourself
as I ask me.
Choice and context
twists of fate
make you, make me,
break you, break me,
made us, broke us,
altered and shattered
you and me.

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I am breathless! My, how deep did this piece dig my heart up! It is, in all honesty, a captivating, beautiful piece! You have a way of making hearts bleed. I love your subtle, yet powerful approach. Excellent write!

  • 8 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    An absolutely mesmerizing piece. Like Ben I read it a few times and each time loved it more. A very clever and compelling write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    What a clever piece of mind-bending poetry this is that I read three times and enjoyed more with every read. I love the bit "What is left is still you and I? No not I. I is altered."

    Excellent and an excellent write. Take care
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. :)

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