Hello

What a clever piece of mind-bending poetry this is that I read three times and enjoyed more with every read. I love the bit "What is left is still you and I? No not I. I is altered."

Excellent and an excellent write. Take care
Ben

An absolutely mesmerizing piece. Like Ben I read it a few times and each time loved it more. A very clever and compelling write.

I am breathless! My, how deep did this piece dig my heart up! It is, in all honesty, a captivating, beautiful piece! You have a way of making hearts bleed. I love your subtle, yet powerful approach. Excellent write!