Is writing enough?

by Saerelune   Apr 5, 2016


Sometimes I think I've had enough
of polluting the ocean with my poetry.

My chest is as hollow as a pirated treasure,
I could write you the steps towards my heart
but you would return empty-handed.

All ink has dried deep inside of my paper cuts;
this lack of emotion is not the eye of a storm,
and I feel like a squid for blinding you.

How I wish to wear my skeleton outside,
like an armour of warning signs
to keep your efforts at bay.

Instead, my spine is easily bent
and writing wasn't ever enough.

10:42 PM
4/5/2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is written with great elegance and absolutely beautiful. Add to my favorite. Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    Lovely peace, liked the flow and metaphors used.

    I really liked the line, 'how i wish to wear my skeleton outside, like an amour of warning signs,' Wow!! beautiful.

    As much as i like writing i really enjoy how people decipher their thoughts and feelings and put them into beautiful words like these.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    With words like this please never "stop polluting the oceans"-this was beautiful! So elegant-lovely-take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You write like a goddess! You always have and each time I read one of your new poems, I melt!

    "I feel like a squid for blinding you."

    LOVE this line!!

    Very detailed with a wonderful metaphor and just oooo wonderful in my eyes!!

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