by Tina Jul 7, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You're arms wrapped tight against me, i can hear the beating of your heart, wanting to stay in this moment, never wanting to part. |
by Aymon F
I just want to say, its so good i read it again. Over and over, If i could i'd rate it a 10. |
by Aymon F
geeeeez! Thats amazing...its hard to express what one feels for ones first love...You managed to hit the nail right on the head, if i may be so cliche, but i feel you really managed to capture a good deal of it consisely and accurately, and it flows really well. good job |
by *~Kaitlin~*
That was a really cute poem..... Keep writing ... i can relate .... check out some of my poems some time if you want ... |