On her sixteenth Birthday (Senryu)

by GB Apr 7, 2016 category : Special events / birthday

On her sixteenth Birthday

Make-up and high heels,
buds of femininity
waiting to blossom.

**for a young lady with much love :)

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8 years ago
by Em

Samoa this is beautiful x
8 years ago
by Hellon

Steady on Samia..I'm not quite there yet haha!!
8 years ago
by Hellon

This is a lovely little piece. Just made me go...Awe as I 'tried' and failed to remember being sweet sixteen :)
- 8 years ago
  by GB
  
  We are always sweet my dear, even in our sixties.
  xoxo
8 years ago
by Ben Pickard

Great to see a new poem from you and this is a cracking little senryu.

Take care and all the best
Ben
8 years ago
by Dagmar Wilson

How lovely sweet sixteen. A big day for a young lady .
Take care