Comments : On her sixteenth Birthday (Senryu)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    How lovely sweet sixteen. A big day for a young lady .
    Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great to see a new poem from you and this is a cracking little senryu.

    Take care and all the best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is a lovely little piece. Just made me go...Awe as I 'tried' and failed to remember being sweet sixteen :)

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      We are always sweet my dear, even in our sixties.
      xoxo

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    Steady on Samia..I'm not quite there yet haha!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Samoa this is beautiful x