Beautiful.

We all have a way to get out our frustrations, our 'words' well just our emotions and yours is poetry. This is written flawless and the rhythm makes it flow smoothly.

I can't even choose a favourite stanza as it's all fabulous, take take.

Em

Hello

As Em says, this is an excellent and fluid piece of writing with nice, tightly structured stanzas that add to the smooth read.

Well done and all the best,
Ben

Beautifully written-I'm glad your talents lie in writing poetry-thank you for sharing this.