Lemon and Lime

by Maple Tree   Apr 13, 2016


Sipping on lemonade
within a springtime mist,
dewy cattails sway,

I dream-

Marigold's cover iris's
so that I remain free,

forever.

You are but a shadow
within a pocketful of
rainbows,

follow me,
tasting sunshine with you
has brought our souls together

at last....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea,
    Such a fabulous write and an enjoyable read as always. Like Ben said it would have been a good contender for your own competition. Your imagery is good and I could imagine sipping that lemonade now.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Andrea, this is so lovely! Such graceful imagery of nature and love. Just beautiful! Take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Such a beautiful piece. It reminds me of summer days sitting in the garden after exams were over revelling in the fact that I didn't have to feel guilty for reading a novel rather than a textbook.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kyreeya

    Wow it's so serine I love it. I was in the poem and I could imagine it as you wrote it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Andrea,

    A stunning write and one that would have graced your own competition I would imagine! Seriously, your nature poetry positively drips with sumptuous imagery!

    Take care and all the best
    Ben

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