by Everlasting
Haunting atmosphere. I could picture the evening walks. I almost felt like I was there. Enjoyed the read. |
by Ben Pickard
I read and rated this the other day and meant to come back to it. |
by Maher
Very nice sir. It's dark and I can feel the chill from the atmosphere this piece creates. I can hear a slowly plucked background from a Resonator fitting this pretty well. |
Really enjoyed your poem. I could imagine taking that walk at night quite clearly. That cold feeling when you wonder if its just a breeze or a spirit still walking there. To walk through history at night is quite unlike |
by Liz
Love the atmosphere you created. |
by Meth
It pulled me into every scene... |
by Liz
Congrats on the win! |
Congratulations on your win - Milly x |
by Rsan
An excellent and heart wrenching piece though you could have given the title from that last line..Then again I'm just tossing coin |
by Brenda
Beautiful write-spooky but graceful in it's words-congratulations on your win! |
Beautiful flow! |
by Maple Tree
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