Verses Of light (Sedoka)

by GB   Apr 17, 2016


Verses Of light

Could be Springs' cadence,
such blossom drifting into,
ethereally dulcet,

and stranger the heart
never been, in this vagueness.
Strumming verses unto light.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Samia, a truly beautiful and tranquil piece.

    The end line gave me Goosebumps so I read the entire piece again and was blown away.
    Thanks for reintroducing me to this form.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Nominated! Love the change to 'ethereally dulcet', flows much better imo. Hope to see this on the front page!

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    I am an absolute sucker for harp music, they just so divine and surreal. Just wanted to share this with you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45CVILu4SL0

    Love this poem, but found "heavenly pleasurable" to feel a bit out of place, how about "ethereal hedonism" instead, "e-the-re-al he-don-ism", I count it as 7 syllables but 'et-he-real' is also a possible pronunciation and not sure if it's a valid one. Regardless, love this, absolutely serene write! Will nominate when i can.

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Charming piece and video as well, it's as you said, this instrument is something divine from the sky...

      I think you are right there, the word "pleasurable" is just too formal for such soft poem, I will partially consider your suggestion. Thank you very much, greatly appreciate your thoughts :)

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