Comments : Verses Of light (Sedoka)

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    I am an absolute sucker for harp music, they just so divine and surreal. Just wanted to share this with you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45CVILu4SL0

    Love this poem, but found "heavenly pleasurable" to feel a bit out of place, how about "ethereal hedonism" instead, "e-the-re-al he-don-ism", I count it as 7 syllables but 'et-he-real' is also a possible pronunciation and not sure if it's a valid one. Regardless, love this, absolutely serene write! Will nominate when i can.

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Charming piece and video as well, it's as you said, this instrument is something divine from the sky...

      I think you are right there, the word "pleasurable" is just too formal for such soft poem, I will partially consider your suggestion. Thank you very much, greatly appreciate your thoughts :)

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Nominated! Love the change to 'ethereally dulcet', flows much better imo. Hope to see this on the front page!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Samia, a truly beautiful and tranquil piece.

    The end line gave me Goosebumps so I read the entire piece again and was blown away.
    Thanks for reintroducing me to this form.

    Em