Hey, i thought that poem was truly great and a marveolous piece of work. It is a really great poem that touches my heart. I was also wandering if your poem was based on an actual event?
Continue to keep up your amazing work,
Brooke

Not bad at all...I like your stuff alot...check out my poems if you have a chance.

That was a sad poem ... im sorry for your lost but that was a really nice poem... sheck out some of my poems if you get time ... keep it up