Her wails carried on
Like the most sorrowful song,
Nice write..enjoyed it..keep up..

This is very good composition.
I like the way how you open the flow, and that was smooth..

for that I will be able to read another write of urs

2 words for you
good job

godbless.
lyn

Jason, this is so so sad but so beautifully written. The story you tell of such heartache is one that many can relate to and so often it ends in disaster.

Great write,
all the best, Em