I Think

by Moe   Apr 19, 2016


I think my thoughts are not connecting,

but I thought that I if I thought
about something for so long
my thoughts would stop trying
to make me stop thinking,

but I was wrong...

The more I thought,
the more my thoughts sought
to make me stop thinking.

So I think
my thoughts are not connecting
on purpose.
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Not much of a poem I think.

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is a little crazy but I can totally relate as I am crazy and we all are somehow...

  • 7 years ago

    by Nazeer

    Lovely

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like the whole scenario behind this.

    It goes to show that overthinking something can make us a little crazy, can't it? As can not thinking enough, both have dire consequences I suppose.

    All the best, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Moe

      But what if I were crazy which is what led me to overthinking? jk. Thank you for your comment.

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I think my thoughts are not connecting,

    but I thought that I if I thought
    about something for so long
    my thoughts would stop trying
    to make me stop thinking,

    but I was wrong...

    The more I thought,
    the more my thoughts sought
    to make me stop thinking.

    So I think
    my thoughts are not connecting
    on purpose.

    --- I would break it up like that to make it easier to read... that's just my opinion.

    So your thoughts are trying to stop you from thinking? May be? May be, not? Our thoughts are just thoughts. hehe

    • 8 years ago

      by Moe

      Ah, first thank you for the advice. And my thoughts, my thoughts. THEY ARE ALIVE!! haha.

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