Setting them Free

by Maple Tree   Apr 21, 2016


My sorrowful pockets
are lined with skeletal
remains.

Dandelion ashes consume me-

They are my reminders
of the people I have lost
within the years of my birth.

Seedling puffs are blowing in the wind-

Just letting
the spirits
fly....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    I love dandelions; the furry tops that beg to be blown. ..

    This simile works well the visual of the fresh flower like a memory etched into a minds eye. Then like death, a season past and the vitality is lost and replaced with ashen seeds. With the cold westerly winter wind the seeds 'puff' into the air with good wishes; 'letting the spirits fly '

    Andrea, this has hit home for me today. Losing our loved ones is hard, but it's worth keeping in mind that their spirits will live with us forever.

    Thank you.

    Michael x

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Andrea, what a sorrowful poem of loss. Setting up the mood so visually with images of skeletal remains. A fresh view of dandelion ashes a reminder of the people you have lost. Ashes and the seeds of the Dandelion all fly away on the wind like the souls of the friends we have lost.

    Beautiful and emotional write as always though so very sad. Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is just beautiful! I love the imagery of your pocket full of your loved ones skeletal remains in the form of dandelion seedlings-Letting them blow into the wind, releasing their spirits, awesome write!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Death is part of life but we really don't like to talk about it since death is final. We all start off as a tiny seed, last for a season and then turn into ashes. The only thing that's left is the spirit. That will remain forever. Take care and many blessings. Hugs.

  • 8 years ago

    by Britt

    Love the images here. So many people see these as sad, somber pieces, but I see a possibility for rejuvenation. Dandelion whispers wishes, and the ashes, to me, signify a hope for another time/life.

    This is just beautiful.