Comments : Contentment in Darkness

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Rob what a deep and dark look at someone who has lost themselves.

    I like in particular the lines

    She saunters through the fog like the angel of death,
    In a necropolis under the cover of night,
    Mislead by the emotions held tight in her soul,

    (Preeminence needs a "-" should be Pre-eminence)

    All in all a very deep descriptive piece. Milly xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Rob, I voted on this the other day and completely forgot to come back and comment so here I am..

    I love how dark and descriptive this piece is. The imagery is beautiful and dark but so fitting.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Rob

      Thank you so much!!