First up another of your poems Scott that I really like. I hope you don't mind but I would like to give you some constructive comments (given entirely to help)

I felt that maybe those sadly skies might sit better as ole sad skies or sad ole skies (as per big ole thunder clouds but this is entirely my own opinion and may not be yours or anyone else's)

Despaire is misspelt should be despair)
(Hiden is misspelt should be hidden)

My favourite lines are: And all the crying in this World Might not never ever make it heal and really like the visuals and rhyming flow throughout
Milly xx