This is just lovely-what a neat poem

Samia,

This is truly beautiful and the form fascinated me as (guess what) I hadn't heard of it BUT I know of - and have written - haiku. I am also aware that, despite contrary belief, haiku/senryu do not HAVE to have 17 syllables - 17 or less I think is acceptable.
Anyway. How you have made 10 syllables so beautiful and such a pleasure to read is beyond me....but you have!

All the very best,
Ben

Samia, you have written a beautiful piece of poetry in less than 17 syllables, I take my hat off to you. This is something I hadnt heard of before so thank you.

Fabulous, Em

Just when I think you can't out due yourself, you prove me wrong...yet again lol. And with that said 10 syllables of pure picturesque wonderfulness!! Almost reminds me of the little mermaid.

Beautiful, GB!