What a sad beautiful poem of love lost. We have all been in relationships where we felt we had found eternal happiness in someone's arms only to find that it dissipates and we are left alone again. The good news is that no matter how many great loves come and go from our lives there will always be someone else that we will come to love just in a different way. Milly xx

Michael, what a beautiful penned poem. You talk so openly and honest of how this lady made you feel when reminiscing that it makes me believe the love lasted some time and/or ended not so long ago. Anyway as Milly said we will have plenty loves that do not work out and then hey presto just as you were giving up true love comes knocking.

I feel though that maybe because the lines are abit unstructured (length) that it may benefit more from being in the centre, just a thought though.

All n all, fab. Em

I think it's alot better now structure wise :)