Very good, liked the nice relaxed flow and the final reveal at the end the worthless lost penny :) |
by Meena Krish
You have given a lonely penny an emotion and feelings. We always think a penny has no value but in fact it carries more then we think. Likewise we always fail to see the worth in others and discard them until its late and we learn the lesson. |
by Em
William this is very well written and has a fabulous (as always) unforced rhyme like the words just float off the tongue when read especially aloud. |
by William Mae
Thank you so much |