Judging comment:

A simple love story about two butterflies, but told in the challenging style of a Rondeau. The rhyme scheme effortlessly displayed here sounds as sweet as the love that yearns to fly up high in the sky. Imagery and music perfectly entwined in this wonderful nature poem. To me this poem hits a sweet emotional spot of music and imagery captured in a compact verse. I love it!

Well done Lucero, this poem is going into my favourites.

Take care,

Michael

Lovely!

Lovely!

I loved this when I read it first time and still do.

Em

Honestly not much to comment on. An endearingly cute poem, and I couldn't find anything to tear apart of offer up for improvement! Keep up challenging yourself for the results are wonderful!

5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

Its beautiful. I kind of have tears in my eyes. its that beautiful.