This is now in my faves. Wow very dark and very good when my nominations are back, I will be sure to nominate it to because this is something else. Everything about it is perfect.

Em

Very dark visual masterpiece of colour.
The idea of jesters and clowns fill my mind with colour. The idea of the word burning down and smashing the colourful stained glass window so that everyone can see immediately takes the mind to a church.

Tearing down the hallowed place reinforcing the idea of the religious connection.

Even the Devil wears red when he announces the end of the world and encourages all that is blasphemous
to come forward. The reference to
Dantes picture which of course portrays his journey through hell makes me think
that this poem paints your journey through hell on earth.

Bringing forth all the angels of the slaughterhouse and ringing the bells of bones are amazing lines. The portrayal as the end of times as being acted on a stage
excellent concept very much enjoyed

An amazingly powerful poem

Milly x