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by deeplydesturbed   May 3, 2016


Something is hurting inside me...
Ripping my soul in two...
Its never right. .never wrong....
Its the way of things.

Why..? Why does this have to happen?
I feel something. .breaking apart..
Falling apart...... .its hurtful.....

Its the pain...
Sometimes thats life....
Like lovers breaking up..
Like you ditching another you....
Why. .does this happen?

Its not going away. .never ever going away...
Its never-ending.... .it feels my fear...
Its like sorrow ,death and grief put together....
Make it stop!

Its the pain.. .that hurts my heart...
Its never ever going away...
My life is falling apart.....
Its ripping my soul in two halves...
Please make it stop!
Please make it stop!

Its the pain.. .its the way of life..
Its going on for a eternity...
Its hurts and it going on and on....
Help me out of this deep darkness of despair....

Help me.. .help me... .please...
Its swallowing me up.....
Laughing at me for my foolishness...
Its killing me from the inside...
Its the pain... .of a life worth of despair ,death sorrow and grief.......
Help me... .please....

Its the pain... .of living.....

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  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Nams, sorry to disappoint you but life is beautiful.
    I agree sometimes it's rough and tough, but there is always some msg life gives us when it does such things.

    It's our perception how we take it,.
    Some take it as hurtful, some as lesson.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    This really is a well written poem simply because you are obviously trying to convey desperation and, by the end of the piece, it felt like my nails were being ripped out, so effective was your writing.

    All I would suggest is an apostrophe throughout for it's ('it's' is a contraction of 'it is')

    Great write and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    There's no better help, besides Truth. When Truth is learned, we battle less.

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