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  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    There's no better help, besides Truth. When Truth is learned, we battle less.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    This really is a well written poem simply because you are obviously trying to convey desperation and, by the end of the piece, it felt like my nails were being ripped out, so effective was your writing.

    All I would suggest is an apostrophe throughout for it's ('it's' is a contraction of 'it is')

    Great write and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Nams, sorry to disappoint you but life is beautiful.
    I agree sometimes it's rough and tough, but there is always some msg life gives us when it does such things.

    It's our perception how we take it,.
    Some take it as hurtful, some as lesson.