by Ben Pickard
A wonderful film and quite a good poem as well now! |
Wow. Powerful and descriptive. |
I often wonder if trees could talk how many stories would there to be told. What all have they seen and been through. We often seek shelter under a big tree. Beautiful write. Take care |
by Brenda
Michael, this is so beautiful! I love your analogy with the tree and a person. Wonderfully done! Take care-Brenda |
by Em
A wonderful read Michael as always. |
Wow! What amazing imagery and heroic story. I loved the layout of the stanzas and the ref to the trees branches being like charred bones. Simply laid out and an easy flow to follow. I'd just got used to you dynamic little short poems and the different layouts. then you hit us with a beautiful story :) Definitely another great poem Milly x |
by J Nair
I have often reached out and touched the gnarled tracks on the trunks of ancient old trees, in my village in Kerala - tried to hug these mighty tall beings and always hope that i could hear the humming of their heart beats deep inside somewhere, they used to make me wonder about beauty of life, |
I love the imagery and also the rhythm which seems so vivid in this poem! Everything seems to be placed just right for the story to come to life. |
by Belle
"The Oak knew only far too well |
What a beautiful story of love, strength and selflessness. |
Oh wow wow wow wow what a beautiful tale!! This really touched something deep inside, and so beautifully written!! Definitely nominated!!! |
Hello Sir Michael, |