Comments : A Change Of Heart:

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Scott, I really liked this one and how you are doing it from the words point if view.

    We all say things we live to regret but the matter of fact is that those of us with a conscience will use good words to apologise.

    Good write, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Did u catch on to the fact that the first bad word's name was spit he turned his life around for the better good so he spells out tips. Went from a bad thing nobody liked to tips that is always appreciated. From bad to good a complete turn around. Thanks for the comment....

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Scott, very clever poem loved the word play between spit and tips and the rhythm throughout. Also liked the view point taken from the word itself rolling out its story. Keep well Millyx

    • 8 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thank you it was so much fun to write