You

by Brenda   May 8, 2016


Every moment
of my life
every breath
that I take
it's all about you...
-
You
three small letters
meaning so significantly
more
you are what starts
my day
and what lays me to sleep
my dreams wrapped
up with you...
-
I mourn our time
apart
willing the clock to spin
ever faster
just to get me back
to you,
my everything,
the one person who
understands me
even when I don't know myself
who makes me laugh and love
in a way I never thought
I could...
-
they say a lifetime together
can seem like
eternity
but for you and I
is tis but fleeting
at best...

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Not about me? Oh heaven's mercy! Alas! May the maw of hell itself swallow me whole and do away with my discarded and broken soul!

    No problem, I will simply find someone else, lol

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Wow! That was quick! Lol! Save your discarded heart for another- for alas I can not give you what you desire-off with you man! Off with you....

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely write Brenda and true when someone takes a hold of you, you want to spend every waking minute with them and if not you will the time to pass and they take over our dreams.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Em, oh indeed - I would much rather spend my day with my love than do something pesky like work, sigh...

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,
    I honestly never knew you felt that way about me...:-)

    Jesting aside, this is a lovely write, from content to your ever delicate layout of the piece.
    Take care and all the very best
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Oh Ben, you are such a silly...lol! You weren't supposed to tell anybody! Yeah, no, it definitely wasn't about you, just saying :) thank you for your comments and starting my day with a laugh -take care -Brenda

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