Comments : Through Your Lips

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Phil, I like this. It's sensual and your wording is quite unique. Never read anything like this before, it usually all soppy stuff.

    You have a good way of words that explain the job at hand.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Lyn Love and Hopes

    Wow ...

    really good one.

    lyn

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Phill

    As Em says, this is a sensual poem indeed but it is done with real delicacy and well placed wording.
    It has an almost soothing quality to it which was a pleasure to read. Great stuff,

    Ben