Unfolded Life

by MiAiM   May 8, 2016


She looked through the window
and saw an outer light
guiding to somewhere, she did not realize...
But it reflected joy on the inside
bringing back memories
in a flash of an eye...
And by then she wondered...
"Have you ever lived a life,
and thought that you are alive,
and no matter what, you will survive
and then you opened your eyes
and read all the lies
that were hidden in between the lines
of each passing day of your life..."
She looked around where the answers are found
but she could not read
what it folds indeed...
She is lost in a world, saying no word
just getting old,
having some memories to be told...
Yet sometimes standing alone,
in a life that was once thought
to be lived and it is turning to be
full of ambiguity...

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Welcome to P&Qs.

    The light helping is reflect on ourselves is a wonderful image especially as it often happens. We all need time to reflect on things, bad or good.

    Take care, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello and welcome to PnQ,

    I like the concept of drifting off into into a reflective window, seeing an outer light, but then that light taking you on a journey of self analysis. The rhymes are punchy and reflect the dark spin on a life.

    Well done, a well written poem.

    Take care,

    Michael

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