What is Freedom?

by Everlasting   May 9, 2016


Freedom is like writing sonnets
without having restrains
Just writing as if it were free verse

That's just what it is

managing to be your own self
despite following the every rule
that are imposed on yourself

May 9, 2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Really like this comparison. i've always thought of writing formed poetry as bonsai trees - gotta keep pruning with patience, otherwise it dies or will grow to its full height. I don't have that patience lol.

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol, it's more than just patience. XD

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes there is no boundary there is no limitations its all free and the gate the is open for the mind to explore without a lock. nice read :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a lovely write. Freedom is a wonderful thing. Loved the comparison of freedom to writing free verse.

    Freedom is like your soul riding on the wings of the wind but inside you and being able to find that freedom no matter what the rules.

    Really very uplifting poem Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmm right

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