The refrain "am I broken" not only haunted the speakers mind but was nicely reflected throughout the poem. It was a poignant piece of self reflection and conflict. Of someone suffering one or more tragic event that has left them feeling broken in some way. |
Thank you... And this poem consists of everyvidea you saw run through your mind, and the best thing about my writing is its all from my heart and soul... It depends on the person reading it but I really appreciate your opinion of my poem! This is one of my best i've ever written and just to know someone can feel the emotion and the tears and live I put in to this just by reading my words. When I wrote this I was struggling to the point of giving up being my only option but I had a reason to keep going... My beautiful baby girl! I felt like I was losing the love of my life! But there was the support even without being physically close that helpede make it! And stay strong enough to live my life and I started to live carefree but I wasn't sure if I was broken or if the love being given to me was still fixing the damage already done! |