Comments : Indecision

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this one. It seems many of u can be illusional when it comes to somebody else and we get misinterpretations of them.

    The rhyme throughout is catchy making it a more enjoyable read.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil Laws

      Thank you. The internal rhyme takes forever. I scrapped so many good lines in failure to make them rhyme enough for this. I cleared 100 hours on this overall.