Comments : Feelin yella in philafriggindelphia

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow. Such imagery and rawness here.

    Sometimes beer solves things and sometimes it adds to them. The words you used are really great. The rhythm and beat fit like a glove.

    Hope this isn't literal though (hugs)

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by donk2ymouth

      Aw. thank you. for some reason I've been getting a lot of coming..it's both humbling and embarrassing about how much i appreciate a simple. "well done"...much appreciated

  • 8 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    [accident]

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This was beyond well done....it was excellent!

    I truly love this....the style, boldness of your word usage
    And just how darn saucy this poem is!!!! Love it!