Seems like you have studied the nature very well.

Your expression and the flow of this poem is very nice. It's a part of your imaginary mind.

But I have got to say that this write would have been much more better if you would have shortened this.

Correction in the second last line.
Spelling - Forgetting.

Over all it's a good write. Keep on going. 5/5

Thank you Black for your comment and your suggestions are almost good.

Such an image packed piece. A wonderful write and a joy to read. Em

Thanks Em