Comments : Possessive Words

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Shanky, loved what this piece has because it's unique and full of emotion.

    I have a secret,
    high classified secret, but wish to share it with you,
    before it's too late.
    ^^
    The beginning made me intrigued as we all love a secret don't we? Anyway, it's obviously something you need to say.

    My life will be over, as soon as the words come out.
    So before I share with you this secret, wanna wish you a lovely night.
    Not just for today,
    for many days to come when i'm gone.
    ^^
    This part is pretty sad as you want this secret out even if it ends your time, so it must have some value to you.

    Good night my honey bee,
    may your dreams bring out the elegance of life you wish to live.
    ^^
    Such a sweet part wishing them the live they want/need.

    Said and done,
    out with the plan. Many will ask,
    please tell them the truth...
    that my deepest secret is and will always be,
    ^^
    Many will be intrigued by it. Deepest, darkest secrets. You write it well.

    "That I love you my darling... and the world is just but emptiness without you in it."
    ^^
    Aww so sad here's the kind of punch line. This person isn't in your life nor on earth which is why the sombre feeling is kept throughout, like a memory.

    I'm ready and free to drift to the stars,
    but you my moon,
    Keep shining
    until I see you.
    ^^
    Lovely ending. You want your 'moon' to keep shining to allow you to be with them.

    Em