Comments : You refuse to listen

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Dagmar, another short year inspiring write from you.

    Can't undo the past
    ^^
    No we cannot undo the past and personally I don't think we should no matter what's gone on there because the past is what makes us who we are today, usually stronger. Yes we may have our downfalls but the strength you show throughout your work is amazing and I feel is key to you fighting the daily struggles you fight.

    learning from it is the key,
    ^^
    Totally agree with this. We do need to learn from our past. The mistakes, the good and the bad because as I said it shapes our todays. I never used to think it did but now I have become stronger with time and I believe it's our strength that helps us not time.

    try not to repeat.
    ^^
    Agreed. We shouldn't repeat the past only learn from it.

    Love your insporation here.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Em for your comment I do appreciate as always.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Absolutely, Dagmar.

    We cannot change the past but we have to learn from it. It isn't about not making mistakes - they are what makes us stronger and more capable in the future.

    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Red Yoshi

    Great senryu dagmar, i think this can be relatable to a lot of people. We do all live in the past whether we realize it or not. Stay strong, because depression is terrible. Hugs you

    • 8 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      I thank you so much and I agree. Take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Dagmar, such a true write! We can't undo the past, it is what it is. Learning from it and moving forward is the best course. Take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yup, that is right: pay attention to what goes wrong in order not to repeat the same mistakes!
    Well executed Senryu:)

    Take care,
    Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very meaningful stuff. Time is beyond the control. All we can do is to learn from the mistakes which we have done in the past.

    Mistakes makes us learn. Nice job.