Innocently

by The Po whet   May 17, 2016


I want to love you
with all the devotion
a monk bestows
his prayers
...with all piety.
if only you'll love me back
with all your tenderness ,
...with all innocence.

By: The Po whet

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great writing. A little piece of delicate magic here. I too love the comparison with a monk',s prayers.

    Take care
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, this is so beautiful and elegant.

    The comparison to loving someone like a monk loves prayer is something else. As, I have said before love is beautiful when you get loved back by the right kind of person.

    Nominated. Em

    • 8 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thanks Em, we all desire that kind of love.Deep and without ceasing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I LOVE your comparison with the Monk and his prayers, very powerful!

    That is a spiritual and powerful connection... this is a creative and beautiful poem!

    • 8 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thank you so much for your comment Maple tree, highly appreciate it.

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