by Em
I will comment more fully later as just going back from coffee break.. With tears lol |
by The Po whet
Don't you dare shed even a single tear on that pretty visage (lol) |
by Ben Pickard
This is great. I love the first stanza: the idea of this person only wanting to hear the words when she didn't believe they held any meaning. It's that whole wanting what we can't have scenario, isn't it? And then, when we have it, it's no longer quite so novel. Unfortunately, applying that to love like you have here is terribly sad. |
by The Po whet
Thanks Ben |
by Em
Moa, well here I am back for more coffee. It's great being boss sometimes, though it's my turn for the cake run so not so good because I hate cake haha. |
This is truly a beautiful piece and although short manages to pack in a lot of emotion. Love is never an easy thing to communicate and we can all too often leave our hearts exposed and vulnerable, even with someone who we think we know well. |
by The Po whet
Thank you Cassie for the comment, I appreciate |