You really had to wait till now, when i'm out all of nomination votes to post ?!?! i'll be back to comment on this wonderful piece, and i really hope someone nominates this :D

Hello Samia

You always surprise me with your knowledge of the forms and your clear ability to execute them perfectly. This is original and a really good read.
Like Mark, I am out of nominations, but I will try to remember to nominate on Monday.

Take care and all the best,
Ben

Holy moly as mark and ben said out of votes. There's loads of talent these days and I'm absolutely gutted you waited till now to post lol

This is really good and unique. Lovely structure and lovely story told.

Em

Resplendent!!!!

I've heard of this form but never tried it and you have done it so effortlessly and beautifully. I also like the mix of two poetry form and the story it holds...well done!