I needed a hand

by fernando   Jul 8, 2004


I needed a hand but you didn't give it to me.I needed food and you didn't feed me.I needed a place to live and you didn't give me one.I needed a friend but you decided to be my enemy.What kind of a friend are you? when i needed you the most you wasn't there.Now i believe what my mother told me "friends are like a dollar in your pocket,when you need them the most they are not there."

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  • 20 years ago

    by fernando

    i wrote this poem cause my so called friend where't there . i know that not everyone is like that.i wrote it cause it happend to me

  • 20 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    I like this poem to its really good! if you ever want to talk let me know

  • 20 years ago

    by Tessa

    if i may suggest, use form in your writing. your poems themselves are really good, and if you use the poetic forms i'm sure you could get more people to read them.