Enchanting to say the least!

Great theme, rhyming as smooth as the glass and very lovely tone throughout the whole poem.Very beautifully penned, you did professional job with this form.

Hello Andrea,

A challenging form executed well. Writing these pieces so that the refrain blends in is (in my mind) the most difficult part. It is like the 'orb' carries the reader through the poem safely through to the end just it does through a sinister night.

Well done,

Michael

Hello Maple

This does seem like a difficult form and with my inexperienced eye, it looks like you have achieved it excellently.
The rhyming is smooth and unforced as Samia points out and your imagery is unsurprisingly excellent!

All the best Andrea -speak soon,
Ben

Andrea, this is just wonderful! Beautiful imagery, really told a fascinating story. Really neat form. As usual you kicked butt and took names, well done!