by rorisang May 23, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
You come in the night to breath in what is left of me. |
by Brenda
This is really good, I'm inclined to agree with Em, it strikes me as fighting with depression. I like how you formatted it out-well done-Brenda |
by Em
Rorisang, another enthralling write by you. I feel though that this isn't about a person but about the feelings of depression taking hold of you and not letting you go. Possibly wrong though. |