Daily, I Keep Going (Acrostic )

by Maple Tree   May 23, 2016


During coffee
Alone,
Intertwined with
Loving
You,

I

Kitchen talk
Eloquently,
Emerged with
Polite conversation.

Greeting
Others with smiles
I
Never knew existed,
Growing within my soul.

    report violation
6


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this , very original simple but powerfully emotional
    so much to read from it. Milly x

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    I am glad Ben has nominated this as it really is very good...

    especially the letters 'I' - the way these have been singled out to show how alone you are and feel despite being surrounded. It could also be shown to be two eyes looking out from a hollow soul into a world full of substance, but yet seems too far away - kind of connected by tear drenched tissues that threaten to pull apart at anytime.

    The masks we wear are as thin as the tissues we wipe our broken hearts with.

    ((hugs)) for your pain.

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, what a magnificent piece.

    Also nominated.
    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    YES *raises fist in air*

    Keep going strong & shining!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, as always-you know how to write them! I just love this-

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Maple Tree