Congratulations on your win.

Congratulations on the win.

Very truthful & powerful words...Congratulations on your win

Judges comment

This poem was a difficult read the first two times I read it. It is a bit of a mouthfull and choppy.
However that being said, third read in the meaning starts to explain itself. This site loves nothing more than a good spirited religious debate. This poem is strong in its stance, we know what side of the fence this author would be seated. I love how 'holy' is exaggerated by the punctuation. Very sarcastic and sarcastic is good in my book. This is a rose among the forms tonight with it's stumbling rhythm and lack of rhyme, yet the imagery is amazing and the meaning intense. Such a dark tone as well. 10 points.