Beautiful writing! Love it!

Michael, I have heard of this form but never really seen it in action till now so thanks for posting and the footnote.

my words are released
to you across the blue sea;
so far, an ocean apart...
^^
Such a beautiful opening of what i feel lovers being separated by distance and this person sending sweet whispers to their lover and hoping it will reach them across oceans. Love the imagery, wouldn't it be great if this happened?

on the foreign breeze
your tender "phrase" raises me
blowing kisses to my heart.
^^
Lovely ending that the lovers words have reached them and risen them with a lovely feeling in their heart, probably other feelings too lol.

Beautiful as always. Em

Michael, I have heard of this form but never really seen it in action till now so thanks for posting and the footnote.

my words are released
to you across the blue sea;
so far, an ocean apart...
^^
Such a beautiful opening of what i feel lovers being separated by distance and this person sending sweet whispers to their lover and hoping it will reach them across oceans. Love the imagery, wouldn't it be great if this happened?

on the foreign breeze
your tender "phrase" raises me
blowing kisses to my heart.
^^
Lovely ending that the lovers words have reached them and risen them with a lovely feeling in their heart, probably other feelings too lol.

Beautiful as always. Em

Haha I'm not even going there, I know what you're like ;)

Michael, I'm not sure how I missed this one, but I did! It is beautifully written.
I would go into a little more depth but I fear I am trespassing on you and Em lol :)))

Take care and come back soon man!

Haha Ben. I'm wondering where he's gone though. Hope he's ok :)