The footprints we made on the beach:
Hope you remember them too!
Each one big and round
(Like an elephant's!),
Carrying the heaviness
Of our laughter -
Till they were washed away...
To be filled once again:
By footprints
Of those who die, young or old,
Or by castles
And unmelting snow angels -
Made in sand to fade.
I always saw them framed
- Our footprints, our sandcastles -
As pictures in the Fairy Tale Gallery,
When I closed my eyes
And cupped my hands over my ears
To hear the sea again.
I remembered wondering why
Everyone couldn't walk through this place
Together, joyfully:
The pained, the dying, the old, the young, the happy
And also you -
Just once.
I like this a lot, from the elephant sized footprints to the wished for walk through the Tate gallery.
I could be wrong but the ending lacks a little lustre. Could it trail off depicting more sorrow? Perhaps using a tweak in format to form space between the final words like stretched heartbeats?